Nice work. Some minor suggestions.
Nowadays it is usual for people to follow different diets. Some do it in order to be healthy and fit. Others just want to keep up with fashion. The pros and cons of dieting are argued by doctors from all over the world. So, where is the truth?
Undoubtedly, the mere fact of following a diet is not bad but only if it is a healthy diet. This
impliesrequires eating fresh fruits and vegetables, foods high in vitamins, avoiding drinkingalcohol, etc. These eating habits (along with doing some kind of sportexercise )are optionalnecessary for everyone who wants to be slim and healthy. Moreover, dieting also can make us more disciplined as we have to eat determinedprescribed foods at a stated time.on a regular schedule. However, dieting can be really harmful and dangerous, in particular for those people who go on some exotic diet. Doing this may result in serious health issues and
is likely tocould cause someillness. In addition to this, dieting can even be a reason offor psychological problems such as a loss of individuality. An aspiration to be skinny is usually caused by a wish offor looking like a celebrity or a top-model. People who do this do not understand that they put their health in danger.
It is obvious
lythat dieting has its advantages and disadvantages. After all, going on aSo, dieting can be a good idea, unless it is notoverdone.
When television was invented, nobody could predict how popular it
willwould be in yearsthe future. Nowadays we can hardly imagine our life without it. Some people watch TV to learn new things; others do it just for fun. I believe, thereforehowever, that television has a negative effect on people.
To start with, many people who are addicted to watching soap-operas and reality shows literally get involved in everything that is
going onhappening on athe screen. They forget about their own lives as lives of TV characters become more interesting and important. This is a really serious problem which is likelycould togrow into various psychological issues.
to this, watching too much TV can cause some other things that are dangerous for our health. For example, vision problems. This means thatWe should listen to doctors who say that the optimal time we can spend watching TV is 3 hours a day.
However, television is an essential part of our daily routine. As I have already mentioned, we get a lot of information while watching TV so we can keep up with the latest world
`snews. We also entertain ourselves by seeing movies and shows on a blue screen. AlthoughPersonally, I think reading books is more beneficial way to learn new things and relax.
All things considered, it is certain that TV has both advantages and disadvantages. But it is necessary to remember about its dangers for our health and
notavoid watching TV too much.
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