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    peter123 is offline Senior Member
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    hi there,
    please proofread:

    An official receipt will be dispatched to you once your payment is confirmed by the bank.

    tks
    pete

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    Default Re: payment

    Quote Originally Posted by peter123 View Post
    hi there,
    please proofread:

    An official receipt will be dispatched to you once [your] payment is confirmed by the bank.

    tks
    pete
    See above. You don't really need "to you" as it's pretty clear that you wouldn't be despatching the receipt to anyone else! You can also just say "once payment is (or has been) confirmed......."

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