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peter123

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hi there,
please proofread:

An official receipt will be dispatched to you once your payment is confirmed by the bank.

tks
pete
 

emsr2d2

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hi there,
please proofread:

An official receipt will be dispatched [STRIKE]to you[/STRIKE] once [your] payment is confirmed by the bank.

tks
pete

See above. You don't really need "to you" as it's pretty clear that you wouldn't be despatching the receipt to anyone else! You can also just say "once payment is (or has been) confirmed......."
 
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