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    Default my diary / pl sir can you check the paragraph

    Today is a very hot day, i usually sleep at 1:30 A.M, i prefer to use split conditioner to cool my room.
    In my country there is power crises specially in summer, altough we have a very good amount of coal stock from which we can generate electricity, but i dont know why our government always reluctant to use coal reserves and always reluctant to take help from iran, Iran said that they can provide electricty in a very cheap rates.
    At this time people of pakistan paying 8 to10 RS per unit, which is very expensive.
    In our country we are facing massive power crises approx 6 to 10hrs daily load shading happened.

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    Default Re: my diary / Please can you check the paragraph

    Quote Originally Posted by noman12 View Post

    Today is a very hot day. I usually go to sleep at 1:30 A.M and I prefer to use split (?) conditioner to cool my room.
    In my country there is are power crises (this is the plural of crisis, I assume that's what you meant) especially in summer, although we have a very good amount of coal stock from which we can generate electricity. but I dont know why our government is always reluctant to use coal reserves and always reluctant to take help from Iran as Iran said that they can has offered to provide electricty in at a very cheap rates.

    At this time, people of in Pakistan paying 8 to10 RS per unit, which is very expensive.
    In our country we are facing massive power crises - approx 6 to 10hrs daily load shading happened - I don't know what you mean by this. Perhaps "the power supply is low/cut for 6-10hrs a day?.
    See above. Remember that "I" has a capital letter, as do the names of countries.

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