Atchan
Key Member
- Joined
- Apr 30, 2010
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Somali
- Home Country
- Somalia
- Current Location
- Saudi Arabia
please help me if there are mistakes in these two stories
Mr. Ali went to Japan in the beginning of the year and bought great amount of cars having different kinds, then he sent on one of his huge ships until it arrived to the gulf countries to begin a new investment journey.
After Ahmed arrived his country, he hired a flat then he didn't wait days until he bought an air conditioner due to hot weather but unfortunately he bought a bad one and he didn't think to return back the bad one because of the lacking and rarely of the air conditioners in his country, so he tried to fix it then he did it.
Mr. Ali went to Japan in the beginning of the year and bought great amount of cars having different kinds, then he sent on one of his huge ships until it arrived to the gulf countries to begin a new investment journey.
After Ahmed arrived his country, he hired a flat then he didn't wait days until he bought an air conditioner due to hot weather but unfortunately he bought a bad one and he didn't think to return back the bad one because of the lacking and rarely of the air conditioners in his country, so he tried to fix it then he did it.