I have an inquisitive mind since young as things around me always intrigue me. When I had to decide on my field of study, science was an obvious choice and a natural fit for me. I believe the outcome of my education equips me well for a further education in sociology and please consider my application.
Please help me in editing the paragraph, the grammar, re-phasing if any and also I have to keep it under 50 words.
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