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    Could you check my sentence please

    "My ambition is to work as a program manager for international NGOs promoting child rights. In that perspective, I regard gaining experience of proposal and report writing as a constructive feature."

    I am wondering about "constructive feature", not sure it make sense...
    Thanks for your help


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    Re: Could you check my sentence please

    Quote Originally Posted by andouze View Post
    "My ambition is to work as a program manager for international NGOs promoting child rights. In that perspective, I regard gaining experience of proposal and report writing as a constructive feature."

    I am wondering about "constructive feature", not sure it make sense...
    Thanks for your help
    If I were you, I would write like this.

    "My goal is to work as a program manager in an international NGO that promotes better rights for children. In this regard, I see gaining experience of working on proposals and writing reports as a productive feature."


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    Re: Could you check my sentence please

    hello !!
    Well thanks for your suggestion, what do you mean by " Iahve more experts in my team" ? Because as you might have understand I am looking for a job / intership thus I need hips of help

    Thanks again for your time,

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