Could you check my sentence please

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andouze

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"My ambition is to work as a program manager for international NGOs promoting child rights. In that perspective, I regard gaining experience of proposal and report writing as a constructive feature."

I am wondering about "constructive feature", not sure it make sense...
Thanks for your help
 

usgrammar

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"My ambition is to work as a program manager for international NGOs promoting child rights. In that perspective, I regard gaining experience of proposal and report writing as a constructive feature."

I am wondering about "constructive feature", not sure it make sense...
Thanks for your help

If I were you, I would write like this.

"My goal is to work as a program manager in an international NGO that promotes better rights for children. In this regard, I see gaining experience of working on proposals and writing reports as a productive feature."


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andouze

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hello !!
Well thanks for your suggestion, what do you mean by " Iahve more experts in my team" ? Because as you might have understand I am looking for a job / intership thus I need hips of help :-D

Thanks again for your time,
 
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