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    Help for one business letter

    Hi to all,

    first sorry for my english.

    We are firm impoting goods to Bulgaria from China, Germany, USA and other countries.

    I would like to make one good business leter for asking firms for their products. I have some different types for the title, text in the letter and the finishing text. Would you advise me which type to use.

    I have some diferent titles for the mesages:

    1. Inquire about (the name of the product)
    2. I'm interested in your (the name of the product)
    3. Please send me a quote
    4.
    Please send me more information on your (the name of the product)
    5. Enquiry about pricing and samples
    6. Request For Price Quote

    Would you advise mewhich title is better to use in the mail?


    I have also some diferent text for the mesages:

    1. We would like to know more about the products your firm offers.
    Please provide to us, a price list, along with your terms and conditions of sale, applicable discounts and additional sales and corporate policies for the following products:

    • product 1
    • product 2
    • product 3

    We will very much appreciate it if you send us all of your internationally certificates ( ISO, CE, ECC, etc)


    2. Please quote us your firm price for the following goods:

    • product 1
    • product 2
    • product 3

    3. Please quote for the product selection below ( FOB based unit price, terms of production & payment, MOQ, etc)

    • product 1
    • product 2
    • product 3


    4. We would like to know more about the products your firm offers and
    would appreciate receiving your wholesale price list and
    information regarding terms and ordering policy for the following products:

    • product 1
    • product 2
    • product 3


    Would you advise mewhich text is better to use for asking information and price for a product?


    I think to the mesage to finish with:

    1. We look forward to your prompt response. 2. Waiting for your soonest reply.
    3. We look forward to hearing from you soon.



    Also which finishing text is better for the end of the mesage?




    Yours faithfully,
    (my name)
    (firm name)
    (my contacts)







    Thanks to all.

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    Re: Help for one business letter

    Thanks for corrections and advices.

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    Thumbs down Re: Help for one business letter

    No, no, no! That way is impossible to enrich his/her composition.

    To begin with:
    We are firming to import goods to Bulgaria from...
    I would like to make a good business letter to ask for firms to their products. I have got various ways to write the title, the main body and the closing remarks. Could you advise me which one is the best?

    Personal comment: I would like to know who teaches you English. It is a shame to have such mistakes while having this level of English. Please, study more or revise what you have written instead of trying to teach somebody things that you do not know. There are other people that are specialised in the language and that know how to explain it.

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    Unhappy Re: Help for one business letter

    Yes, you are right. I was thiniking in other things and I misunderstood it.

    Please, accept my most sincere apologies.

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