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    Default another(short) text that needs help

    i would appreciate if someone could review this paragraph , and suggest corrections. At the moment it seems confusing, I am not sutre about the expression "established upon an idea" and the sentence seems to long to follow
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    Last edited by mushisushi; 11-Jun-2010 at 12:51.

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    Default Re: another(short) text that needs help

    thanks for viewing it
    it has to do with people

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    Last edited by mushisushi; 11-Jun-2010 at 12:51.

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