Dear all readers, i just need a help about my letter which i will send to my professor about accepting a scholarship. What do you think of my letter, since i'm not good in English and still learning.

This is my letter:

Dear Professor KJ,

Greetings
Thanks for your email. Its an honor for me to accept this opportunity. I hope i can fulfill excellent learning and study in your university. Your guidance is very worthwhile for me.

Many thanks and kind regards,

hadist134.



thats all, if you have a suggestion or feedback atleast one word, i really gratefully.