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Would you like to have lived 100 years ago ?
This is a very interesting issue which a person should not provide a " yes " or " no " answer without consideration. Was it good to live one hundred years ago without an electric cooker or not? Maybe that time was better or maybe not.
On the one hand, the environment was cleaner and safer 100 years ago. There weren't problems inside
thecountries which were caused by politicians. People didn't kill each other as they do now. The oceans and rivers were much cleaner than now. People did care about whole environment, there was no pollution. Life was much easier because there were no problems with aadministration, post officepublic offices etc. Terrorists weren't active as they are now.
On the other hand, it is much easier and quite interesting to live in the modern world of technical achievements. Nowadays it is assumed that our houses are equipped with gas, water and electricity. We would find it difficult to live without a telephone, a washing machine or an electric cooker. Maybe nowadays
have athere is more pollution than we had 100 years ago, maybe the last century werewas safer, but we have better electricity and life is easier. Nowadays we havesee more acts of terrorism than before but methods of defending countriesthese acts are better and more effective. The production of food is more succesfullefficient. Travelling is much more comfortable thanks to aeroplanes. And cities' communicatin is faster as well.
In conclusion, thanks to medical achievements and technology, people live in comfort and health. Life in the
XXI21st century is more comfortable, more enjoyable and easier. I would find it difficult to live in thethe 20th century.
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