I have done the evaluation of form for that article, but my tutor said my evaluation is poor
This is what I have written
The style of the chapter is fine. There is an introduction for each topic that draws our attention to the topic itself. The ideas are well organized. The writer puts the factors in order and explains them fulfilly and he puts hi s ideas in sequences. In another words, his explanation for factors is excellent. The language is used easy and understandable. The writer performs his goals and states them clearly
Could you give me some ideas or suggestions to improve and develop my evaluation?
Thanks in advance