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    Default Can you correct these sentences,

    1- New Zealand is not such a wonderful society to live in for a new immigrant insofar as it is hard to fit in with people.

    2-Asian societies treat their elderly better insofar as their children genuinely take care of them.

    3- Women make better mangers than men insofar as their organizational skills are better than men.

    4-My father was not a perfect father insofar as, although he takes me to the entertainment park every Sunday, he does not spend more time with us.

    5- NZ is wonderful place to live in insofar as, although it is categorised as an expensive country, it has astonishing nuture.

    6- I think Asian people are more determined to get employment than Westren people insofar as, if they have an opportunity of employment, they will achieve success in the given field.

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    7- Some communist countries control their citizens to the extent that people are unable to give their opinions in the field of policy.

    8- Many people today are afraid of losing their jobs to the extent that they obey their mangers even they are wrong.

    9- Overpopulation in the major cities of contries is causing overcrowding to the extent that people need at lesst two hours to go to work.

    10- The young men and woment in Westrn countries are very independent of their parents to the extent that, if they reach the age of 20, they go to flatting.

    11-The pollution problems of the world are becoming very serious in most mjor cities to the extent that, if nothing is done, people will die of lurg disearse.

    12- Many of the southern hemisphere countries are experiencing much drier weather to the extent that it does nt rain for consective months.


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    Default Re: Can you correct these sentences,

    The word 'insofar a' is wrongly used in 1 - 6.
    It means 'to the limit'.
    They way you have used the word in the contexts makes it seem to mean 'so much so that' which is not correct.

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    Default Re: Can you correct these sentences,

    Thinks bro

    So how can I use it.

    Any one can correct them please?

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    Smile persuasive essay writing

    good !!

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    Default Re: persuasive essay writing

    Guys I am really need a one who can help me with this

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