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    In my dreams you are mine...
    But
    In my life you are a dream...


    Living without you is my luck…and staying with you is my dream and I don't want that dream to come true…it's some how strange but this is the fact…

    When I feel alone I wish that I can huge you then I erase this thoughts and continue walking through the dark ways…that ways where I have born...that ways where I have grown up...Where I'm still surviving…

    Day after day is crossing this dark life...and I'm still searching for light……….

    You appeared in my ways like a moon light…then suddenly you hide behind the black cloud…I always been waiting for you … but you forgot me and also forgot to paint my dark ways with your light….

    I will never ever blame you for that…I'll just catch your image in my eyes when you will come back again…this image will give me a reason to keep living in the darkness and will make me remember that there are still a lots of stars in the sky…

    So I will keep walking in this dark ways with the shining stars…



    Keep coming in my dreams...
    Because
    I can't imagine you in my real life...




    if there r any comments please write it ^^ cozz this is my first article …



    You are a dream…
    And I'm a dreamer…

    Freedom lover…

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    Quote Originally Posted by freedom lover View Post
    In my dreams you are mine...

    But
    In my life you are a dream...


    Living without you is my luck…and staying with you is my dream and I don't want that dream to come true…it's some how strange but this is the fact…

    When I feel alone I wish that I can huge hug you then I erase this these thoughts and continue walking through the dark ways…that ways where I have was born...that ways where I have grown up...Where I'm still surviving…

    Day after day, is crossing this dark life...and I'm still searching for light……….

    You appeared in my ways like a moon light…then suddenly you hide behind the black cloud…I have always been waiting for you … but you forgot me and also forgot to paint my dark ways with your light….

    I will never ever blame you for that…I'll just catch your image in my eyes and when you will come back again…this image will give me a reason to keep living in the darkness and will make me remember that there are still a lots of stars in the sky…

    So I will keep walking in this dark ways with the shining stars…



    Keep coming in my dreams...
    Because
    I can't imagine you in my real life...




    if there r any comments please write it ^^ cozz this is my first article …



    You are a dream…
    And I'm a dreamer…


    Freedom lover…
    Freedom Lover, this is excellent!

    ===Not a teacher===

    I have made some ammendments. If you would like, please modify.

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    2010 , thanks for ur reply and the correction
    i'll work on it ^^

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    thank u

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    beautiful words thanks a lot

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