[Essay] Could you plz check out this short para for me?

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wang.cupid

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Dear friends, I wrote this paragraph this evening and I wanna make sure that it has no grammatic errors. Could you plz check it out? Thanks.

Should we stop using animals for experimental purposes? We are bombarded with the theme on television, in newspapers and magazines for years, and it is still considered as the riddle of the Sphinx. In this essay, I would like to weight the benefits of using animals in our labs against the possible dangers, or harm accrues with it.
 

wang.cupid

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Thanks, my dear friend!

Have fun!
 
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