What's wrong with the spoken statement. someone please help
'Mom. In here, you'll get everything to take care of me.'
In and of itself, there doesn't appear to be anything wrong for a spoken sentence. Perhaps it could be wrong depending upon the context (what was said before or after this sentence was spoken) and/or what the speaker was emphasizing.
I might change the punctuation and write it differently like this: Mom, in here you'll get everything to take care of me.
Last edited by Barb_D; 13-Jul-2010 at 18:04.