Technology plays a vital role in modern world and makes possible the advancement in every field of life
is possible just because of Technology.It derives from many manyyears of hard work done by scientist. (your sentences were fine, but I thought it would be better this way )
Many countries in the world are still striving to reach the highest level of achievement in different fields such as Computer Technology, Science Technology, Agriculture Technology or more important
antly Health Technology. It is proved by thehistory that, by acquiring right type of advancement in every sphere of life, (I'm not sure if on can acquire a type of advancement) you can compete with the world (How can you compete with the world? Perhaps you can keep pace with the world would be a better choice)and mark your thumb on top. I believe, West is so far ahead fromof Asian countries except Japan and China. Now, technology transfer is possible because of the globalization. We hope that in coming yearsthe gap of technology between West and Asia will be squeezed in near future.
I think it's fine now.