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    francycham is offline Member
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    Default can you please correct this termination letter.

    can you please correct this termination letter and suggest a good sentence to inform the employee this is a 30 days notice.

    Dear.....,

    We regret to inform you that your employment with .....has been terminated.
    You have been given several verbal and written warning with regard to your work performance. Unfortunately, the management did not find any changes and improvement in your work performance. Hence, the management has decided to remove you from your position as a Sales Executive.

    (This is a thirty days notice. His last working day will be after 30 days from this letter issued. Please suggest a good sentence for me)

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    Default Re: can you please correct this termination letter.

    Quote Originally Posted by francycham View Post
    can you please correct this termination letter and suggest a good sentence to inform the employee this is a 30 days notice.

    Dear.....,

    We regret to inform you that your employment with .....will be terminated as from 00/00/0000 [insert exact date] - giving you the required 30-day period of notice.
    You have been given several* verbal and written warnings with regard to your work performance. Unfortunately, the management has not found any changes or improvement in your work performance. Hence, the management has decided to remove you from your position as a Sales Executive.

    * If a specified number of warnings is required by law, change 'several' to 'three' (or whatever).
    Rover

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    Default Re: can you please correct this termination letter.

    My suggestion for the first part:

    We regret to inform you that your employment with .....will be terminated on 00/00/0000 [insert exact date]. This letter serves to give you the required 30-day notice of termination.


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