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    Default Paragraph regarding tourism industry which needed improvement.

    The tourism industry in the sounthern region of the country boom on the local level and as time go by, it will boom on international level. When the industry boom in local level, it will receive big number of tourist from other part of the country and when it boom on international level, more foreigner will come to the region to visit.

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    Default Re: Paragraph regarding tourism industry which needed improvement.

    Quote Originally Posted by michael281001 View Post
    The tourism industry in the sounthern southern region of the country is booming on the at a local level and, as time goes by, it will boom on at an international level. When the industry booms in at a local level, it will receives a big large number of tourists from other parts of the country and when it booms on at an international level, more foreigners will come to the region to visit.
    See above. You need to concentrate on using "s" at the ends of plurals and at the end of third person singular verbs.

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