A) This doesn't sound right to me, an alternative might be - When he reached the outskirts of town, away from everyone, he became realised his mistake.
B) He only had himself to blame, sinking to the level of the idiots by bursting out in anger because of some mocking words.
C) Not sure if you need the 'But', - Instead, if he had played his cards right, they would soon be sitting together in her orchard, talking love, strocking her beautiful hair and eating fruit out of her hand.
Now all I do is sit back and wait for someone to correct mine
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