Please, could you proofread my text

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He felt empty, powerless and lonely - a victim of unrequited love, who had to put the mask of one who was content with his life. Just a few hours ago, he was flying high in the sky and now he had plunged into the abyss. The world indeed was a dark and unfriendly place where a sensitive person was doomed to suffering. When life was now so cruel towards him, what could he expect later on when the more serious misfortunes would attack him from all sides?
 

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He felt empty, powerless and lonely - a victim of unrequited love, who had to put on the mask of one who was content with his life. Just a few hours ago, he was flying high in the sky and now he had plunged into the abyss. The world indeed was a dark and unfriendly place where a sensitive person was doomed to suffering. When life was now so cruel towards him, what could he expect later on when [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] more serious misfortunes would attack him from all sides?

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