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    On the second day of first test match between Pakistan and England, both teams faced ups and downs. England lost his last 6 wickets on just 23 runs and they were succeeded to make a good total of 354 on bouncy and dry pitch. Pakistan started his game by loosing 6 wickets on just 47 runs. NO one could resist ENglish bollers apart ASIF and SHOAIB. They took their team score on 105 but SHOIB could n t face FNN s bowling for a long time. His catch was caught by STRUSS who was standing on third slip.

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    Quote Originally Posted by adnanmushtaq View Post

    On the second day of the first test match between Pakistan and England, both teams faced ups and downs. England lost his their last 6 wickets on for just 23 runs, and they were succeeded to make in making a good total of 354 on a bouncy and dry pitch.

    Pakistan started his the game by loosing losing 6 wickets on for just 47 runs. NO one No-one could resist (perhaps "deal with") the English bollers bowlers apart from Asif and Shoaib. They took their team Pakistan's score on to 105 but Shoaib could n t couldn't face FNN's bowling for a long time very long. His catch He was caught out by Struss who was standing on at third slip.
    See above for my amendments. Cricket's not my favourite sport, but I'm pretty sure I've got the terminology right!!!

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    Good try, emsr.

    (Para 2) 'Pakistan started their first innings and soon lost 6 wickets for just 47 runs'.

    (Last sentence) 'He was caught by Strauss at third slip.'

    'FNN' should be 'Finn' and 'STRUSS' is 'Strauss'.

    Rover

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    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    See above for my amendments. Cricket's not my favourite sport, but I'm pretty sure I've got the terminology right!!!
    thak you very much

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    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    See above for my amendments. Cricket's not my favourite sport, but I'm pretty sure I've got the terminology right!!!
    thank you soooo much, you are very good in cricket terminology.

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