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    #1

    Check My Lines Please

    I am not strong enough against you
    Donít let me stay without you
    I have just come to my senses

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    Re: Check My Lines Please

    Quote Originally Posted by Volcano1985 View Post
    1.I am not strong enough against you incorrect

    I am not strong enough to defeat/conquer/compete with/fight against/ you
    2.Donít let me stay without you correct . Why don't use "stay alone" ?
    3.I have just come to my senses
    - I'm not sure whether this is correct or not.
    I think it should be "I have just come to feel things by my senses again".
    Thanks !

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    Re: Check My Lines Please

    Quote Originally Posted by Volcano1985 View Post
    I am not strong enough against you
    Donít let me stay without you
    I have just come to my senses
    They should all end with a full stop.

    Rover

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