At the outset, we would like to thank you for your continues support to make Dwarkadas jeweler achieve its peaks of success
It gives us immense pleasure to announce that Dwarkadas Chandumal Jewellers is participating at the India International Jewellery Show (IIJS), Indiaís biggest jewellery show. We are Pleased to invite you to a rare show of our new range of Jewellery that we would be launching at the event with an exclusive fashion show - an exclusive preview for our loyal patron, thatís you.
As we have limited number of seats. Hence, we request you to confirm your participation at earliest, so we can book a seat for you.
I have two comments to add:
'At the outset' is not appropriate, 'first of all' is preferred.
You participate 'in an event' not 'at an event'.Dwarkadas Chandumal Jewellers is participating at the India International Jewellery Show.
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