[Essay] Part 1 for my term paper.. help please

[radar]

Actually my in my college the prof. don't give A to anyone .. so that's why i need you to give me some touches that might make him impressed
I would be thankful if you do me this favor .. i know that there are lots of professional english writer
please I am waiting for your suggestions

TRANSPORTATION OF OIL SAFELY​

INTRODUCTION

Last century, oil became the most important good worldwide. Oil is a hazardous material and also it is useful. Oil is used as an energy resource to develop and establish countries infrastructure. Although it is available in certain countries, the others want to use it as a resource. Those countries which have plenty of oil can sale the extra to them. To trade oil, people consider it as a dangerous good that may harm the environment including wildlife and marine life. In order to transport oil they should apply the safety instructions. This paper shows comparison between some methods for transporting oil safely and causes and effects for the transportation of oil safely.

OIL PRODUCTS

When we hear the word oil some people do not know what is the oil. Most of them knew that oil is an important and expensive thing. Actually oil is the source for most of our stuff that we are using daily. Oil can be classified into two types: liquid and solid.

Gasoline, diesel and naphtha are made from liquid oil. Gasoline is an important for most people especially for cars and motorcycles as a fuel. Diesel is for big vehicles naphtha on the other hand is used for aircrafts as a fuel. They are all harmful because their boiling points are low and they can evaporate at room temperature which makes them easy flammable materials and also they could cause major diseases such as cancer.

Currently, live is difficult without plastics and glasses. They are available everywhere home, schools, hospitals, ..., etc. They make our lives easier, safer and more comfortable. They also might be danger and causes diseases. This is why we have to be careful when we are working with oil and its products.



thank you

 

[billmcd]

Some suggestions, good luck:

THE SAFE TRANSPORTATION OF OIL​

INTRODUCTION

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OIL PRODUCTS

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Currently, [STRIKE]live[/STRIKE]life is difficult without plastics and glass[STRIKE]es[/STRIKE]. [STRIKE]They[/STRIKE]Both are available everywhere, home, schools, hospitals, ..., etc. They make our lives easier, safer and more comfortable. But they also might be dangerous and cause[STRIKE]s [/STRIKE]disease[STRIKE]s[/STRIKE]. This is why we have to be careful when we are working with oil and its products.

 

[Raymott]

Actually my in my college the prof. don't give A to anyone .. so that's why i need you to give me some touches that might make him impressed

Your professor will be impressed if you successfully pass this off as your own work. But you will know the truth.

 

[radar]

^^^
u r right but u dont know my college ..

they dont teach us .. they just give us the assignment and dont give grades for trying ..
they need something perfect without teaching me how to do the write thing ..

do u know that at the beginning of the semester he told us no one get an A except the english native speaker ..

you dont know that i worked hard all the semester and the highest grade was C+ .. and the highest grade in the class was B

that makes me write my first part in this forum just to edit my writing and to know my mistakes .. and also i would like to see after English native speakers editing what grade he will give them? .. :roll: