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    Default I am lonely, it blows with winds and sins

    I am lonely, it blows with winds and sins.

    Correct grammatically and makes sense?

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    Default Re: I am lonely, it blows with winds and sins

    It doesn't make sense to me-what does it refer to?

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    Default Re: I am lonely, it blows with winds and sins

    My being lonely, what else can I say? That?

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    Default Re: I am lonely, it blows with winds and sins

    Anyone?

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    Default Re: I am lonely, it blows with winds and sins

    I think it works, as a poetic verse, but not a very clear one.

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