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    Default Biography (1)

    Could anyone proofread my biography. And, would be grateful to him/her.
    My name is Hassan and I am 22 years old. I live in Saudi Arabia, the country that I was born. I finished secondary school then I canceled going to college. Right now I study at home by my father and Using English website which improving my English skills. My father is a translator in a common company between Saudi government and United Nation. I went to Somali twice, in 1994 and 2001. It is an ashamed matter not to visit your country frequently, but what happening in my country is horrible situation.

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    Quote Originally Posted by atchan View Post
    My name is Hassan and I am 22 years old. I live in Saudi Arabia, the country that I was born.
    I live in Saudi Arabia, the country in which I was born.

    I finished secondary school then I canceled going to college.
    I finished secondary school and then, though accepted, decided against going to college.

    Right now I study at home by my father and Using English website which improving my English skills. My father is a translator in a common company between Saudi government and United Nation.
    Currently I study at home with my father and the Using English website which has been a great help in improving my English skills. My father works as a translator in a common company between the Saudi government and the United Nations.

    I went to Somali twice, in 1994 and 2001. It is an ashamed matter not to visit your country frequently, but what happening in my country is horrible situation.
    I have been to Somalia twice, in 1994 and 2001. I regret not visiting your country more frequently, but unfortunately the current political situation has made travel there more prohibitive.

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