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    Could you please revise my c.v.
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    Name Mohammed Sad Alijla.
    Telephone: (H.): 00970-8-2811298
    Mobile: 00970-59-9781774
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    Place of birth: Palestine, Gaza strip, Gaza.
    Date of birth: September 10,1966
    Current residence: Palestine, Gaza strip, Gaza.
    Marital status: Married + 2.
    Qualifications: Bachelor of Journalism-Islamic university. Gaza, 1996
    Courses & seminars: 1- Four English courses (levels: 9-12) Amideast, Gaza, 2004-2005
    2- Internet and e-mail course. Gaza, 1999.
    3- Word 97 & windows 98 course. Gaza 1999.
    4- Participation in the program: The role of the media in a civic society. USA, 1998
    5- Participation in the seminar: Reporting on the legislative council. Austria, Salzburg, 1996

    experiences:
    1- Current job: governmental employee. Public relations - Palestine Monetary Authority, since July 1997
    2- Part time journalism teacher, Islamic university, Gaza. (One semester, 1997)
    3- Managing editor, Albayan monthly magazine, Gaza 1995-1997.
    4- A part time correspondent, Al Nahar daily Palestinian newspaper, 1994-1996.
    5- Director of the electoral campaign of Mrs. Rawya Shawa- member of the Palestinian Legislative Council. (during the first Legislative election in Palestine, 1996)

    Languages: 1-Arabic (mother language): excellent in all skills.
    2-English: very good in both reading and writing, medium in speaking and weak in listening.
    3-Hebrew: medium in all skills.
    Interests:1-Reading and writing.
    2-Learning about other cultures.

    Thank you very much

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    Marital status: Married + 2.- I'd say Married with two children
    Qualifications: Bachelor of Journalism-Islamic university. Gaza, 1996 - Grade? Also, as it's a name, say Islamic University. Plus I'd put it on a separate line and give the fulld dates:

    Qualifications:
    Bachelor of Journalism-Islamic university. Gaza, 1992-1996

    4- Participation in the program: The role of the media in a civic society. USA, 1998 (city?- you give the city for Austria, so be consistent)

    experiences:- Professional Experience (or Employment)

    A part time correspondent- no need for 'a' and hyphenate part-time

    Arabic (mother language): excellent in all skills.- as it's your mother tongue, I think there's no need for further qualification

    weak in listening- very honest, but I wouldn't put it in a CV

    medium- maybe intermediate would be a better term

    Again, with headings like 'Languages' I'd put the rest on a new line


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    Thank you a lot. Really, I used very much by your comments. I am going to revise my c.v. according to them. Thanks again

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    You're welcome.

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    Hi!My name is Lhagii. I am Mongoloian. I want to find anyone who speaking in english to teach me writing and speaking in english. Please contact me. Best wishes!

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