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    Default Can somebody give me some comment on how to further improve the following sentences?

    1) The doctor told me that i should start watching over my health/watch my health/watch over my health condition.

    2) The doctor told me to watch over my health/watch my health/watch over my health condition

    1) What gun did you shoot at the shooting range?

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    Default Re: Can somebody give me some comment on how to further improve the following sentenc

    Quote Originally Posted by michael281001 View Post
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    1) What gun did you shoot at the shooting range?
    Thought I'd say the sentence this way..

    What gun did you use at the shooting range? (there many types of guns at the shooting range.)

    Not a teacher.

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