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    Default revising of one sentence 2

    Dear teachers,

    Would you be kind enough to share with me your opinion concerning the following sentence?

    Her body was dressed in a soaked, clinging clothes that made her still more charming.

    Thanks for your efforts.

    Regards,

    V

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    Default Re: revising of one sentence 2

    Quote Originally Posted by vil View Post
    Dear teachers,

    Would you be kind enough to share with me your opinion concerning the following sentence?

    Her body was dressed in a soaked, clinging clothes that made her still more charming.

    Thanks for your efforts.

    Regards,

    V
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