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    Default Unemployment

    UNEMPLOYMENT
    The unemployment leads to increase commit suicide and crime, where the unemployment leads to worse financial situation. More people had lost their job for long time and that mean there is no income. So it is serious threat to live of the poor. The unemployment people may also feel that is no mean to live, and that leads to be depressed which leads to smoke, drink and suicide. In addition there are unemployment men who stole rice because he was too hungry and he didnít have money to buy food. Finally, the unemployment effects on the behaviors such as smoking and drinking also it effect on social. So the government should be find solution to decrease the rate of unemployment.

    please, correct it..and your advise...thank you

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    Quote Originally Posted by rayan_engg View Post
    UNEMPLOYMENT

    The Unemployment leads to crime and an increased commit suicide rate and crime, where the unemployment leads to worse due to worsening financial situations. More people had lost their job for long time Many people are out of work for a long timeand that mean there is resulting in no income. So It is a serious threat to the lives of the poor. The unemployment Unemployed people may also feel that there is no mean reason to live, and that leads to be depressed depressionwhich, in turn, leads to smoking, drinking and suicide. In addition, there are unemployment unemployedmen people who stole steal rice because he was they aretoo hungry starving and he didnít don't have money to buy food. Finally, the unemployment affects on the behaviors such as smoking and drinking but it also it has an effect on social society. So The government should be try to find a solution to decrease the high rate of unemployment.

    Please correct it and give me your advice. Thank you.
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    Unemployment = noun
    Unemployed = adjective
    Social = adjective
    Society = noun.

    Be careful with your use of indefinite/definite articles and punctuation.

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