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  1. Moonwalker's Avatar

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    Just one sentence need correction

    There was a question in a Toeic book
    Q. Wht kind of advertisements do you pay the most attention to?

    Could you correct any errors or awakard expressions plz?

    A. I like advertisments with specific information about the product's features showing what is differnt from its competitve products.

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    Re: Just one sentence need correction

    A. I like advertisments with specific information about the product's features showing what is differnt from its competitve products.

    You expressed your opinion extremely well. I was only able to notice several mistakes.
    I like advertisments with specific information about the product's features,
    for example: information about what makes it different from competitive products.

    OR

    I like advertisments with specific information about the product's features which shows what is different from its competitors.


    The first part worked well; however the last part was awkward and did not flow off the tongue very well. Try saying it aloud and see if it makes sense.

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    Re: Just one sentence need correction

    I like advertisments with specific information about the product's features and their difference from competitors.

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