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    Interna is offline Newbie
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    Hello!

    I wrote a narration in English which is not my native language, and I was wondering what native speakers would think of it. (Is my writing too simple/childish? Or is it interesting to read?)

    So if anyone's bored and feels like reading.. I uploaded the document and it's called 'Monologue on a wooden bench'. I must say it's quite heavy so be warned.

    Thanks in advance!

    Greetings,
    Nanieke
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    Lol.. I'm scared now.

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