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    Ildus1988 is offline Newbie
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    Last paragraph of my Essay, can you tell me what is wrong?

    All in all, unexpected quizzes, homework assignments and exercise deficiency are three main stress causes of my life. But I could make these unpleasant events less stressful. As an example, instead of watching TV in the evening, I might go to the Recreation center and do some aerobic exercise. I could perceive an abundance of assignments as a challenge to learn more and be successful in the future and finally I could suggest to myself that knowledge checking might be every class and prepare for that. If I did all this, I think I could significantly reduce stress in my life.

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    Re: Last paragraph of my Essay, can you tell me what is wrong?

    finally I could suggest to myself that knowledge checking might be every class and prepare for that

    I wanna say that if I suggest to myself that quizzes will be evey time (every class) anf if I prepare for them in advance - this will be less stressful for me.

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