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    Question Helppp! Is this a run-on? And if not does it make sense?

    So i'm not so sure this sentence is making sense. i'm really bad a structuring sentences. I'm basically trying to say how the words an author uses in her story can describe her opinion on what she personally thinks individualism means.

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    Analyzing this part of the passage, the reader can assume that the descriptive terms utilized by the author, such as "carefree" and "proud" describe her own personal opinion of individualism.

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    Re: Helppp! Is this a run-on? And if not does it make sense?

    It makes sense to me.

    I would put a comma after 'proud'.

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    Re: Helppp! Is this a run-on? And if not does it make sense?

    kay thank you so much! (:

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