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    Default I need someone to correct my writing about the happiness.

    Please our teachers proofread this:

    When I had contemplated in causes of happiness, I found that all causes that people think about as a source of happiness will lead to a temporary not eternal happiness.

    If we think happiness is to have much money , we will be worry if these money was stolen or lost.
    If we think happiness is to get married, we will feel worry if the spouse died or divorce was happen.
    If we think happiness is to be a famous , we will feel worry if we get sick or something make us spent the rocket.

    But if we think the happiness is to satisfy Allah we will not be worry about any thing because Allah is the only one who can make us happy in this life and the hereafter.

    Generally, To be happy we have to know why are we here in life and to what purpose allah created us.

    Thank you in advance.

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    Default Re: I need someone to correct my writing about the happiness.

    I want to thank our teacher* Mr, Gilllnetter * for helping me
    Last edited by OPENED EYES; 11-Oct-2010 at 01:13.

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