First impression is that you tried to put many things into one sentence, which will surely tire your readers (including me). Try to separate it so that reader can easily follow your thoughts. Your point is to make better informed readers, not to impress them. --> I'm not trying to be your teacher, but just tell my thoughts as a reader.
- Achieve comprehensive and sustainable urban development.
- Provide better municipal services and agriculture to build a modern state.
I hope that it may give you another idea about how to present your points. Sometimes format does matter. Good luck.
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