[CV] please check my CV

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ger-mes

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Hello,

Would you please check and correct my CV?
I am applying to a business school so this CV is not for finding a job.
Very appreciate in advance.


Maxim Chernov
Moscow, Russia
Tel: +7 915 ***
maxim***@***l.com


Work experience

Kärcher, Moscow, 02/2009 – present
Product manager
Responsibilities
• Strategic planning and direction of sales of automatic gantry car washes and equipment for industry, forming price policy
• Direct sales, comprehensive support to dealer’s sales
• Bringing new clients and keeping up relationship with existing ones
• Providing trainings in industrial products for the dealers
• Organization and participation in target exhibitions
Achievements
• Involved investors and started up a new sector in car wash business in Russia - self-service car wash centers, with 1 site opened in Nizhniy Novgorod, 2 sites under construction in St. Petersburg and 2 sites under construction in Volgograd
• Achieved 11% increase in turnover of industrial products in Russia last year
• Successfully realized an extensive 8-month project with Mercedes Benz RUS. It was included: initial negotiations of delivery several automatic and manual car washes with water recycling system, discussing and signing contract, designing and implementing technical solutions and supervising installation.
• Set up distinct and clear system of cooperation among the headquarters in Germany, Kärcher Russia and vast chain of local regional dealers, regarding industrial range of equipment

Kärcher, London, UK, 03/2008 – 02/2009
Field Service Engineer
Responsibilities
• Service, maintenance and installation of automatic gantry car wash systems and water recycling systems
• Fault finding and further repair
• Technical support for customers on site
• Monitoring availability of spare parts and making relevant orders
• Making reports weekly
Achievements
• Achieved 25% decrease in warranty claims by timely and professional approach in servicing key accounts
• Successfully managed to cover car wash sites of East London and Kent County with service and maintenance

Kärcher, Moscow, 02/2007 – 03/2008
Field Service Engineer
Responsibilities
• Fault finding and repair of domestic and professional equipment (mainly floor-cleaners, sweepers and high-pressure jet units) within a filed of mechanics, electronics, electrics, hydraulics, pneumatics
• Installation and start of new equipment on site
• Participated in exhibitions providing technical support
Achievements
• Progressed from domestic to professional equipment.
• Was solely in charge of the equipment in several big companies, providing full technical and service support for them

Education

Specialist in Engineering, 2001 - 2006
Automation of technological processes and productions in manufacturing
Volgograd State Technical University, Volgograd, Russia

Personal details

- Hard-working, initiative, communicative, purposeful
- Love theater. Do amateur acting.

References

- Stanislav ****, Head of Sales Dep., Kärcher Russia, +7 495 **
- Oleg ****, General Director, Kärcher Russia, +7 495 **
- John ****, Head of Service Dep., Kärcher UK, +44 **
 

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Welcome to the board, ger-mes.

I can't find much wrong with your CV.

Unless anybody else suggests any refinements, you can use it as is.

Rover
 

ger-mes

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Thanks a lot Rover_KE,
There are just some points where I have doubts about:

1. "Successfully realizaed an extensive 8-month project..." or maybe "Successfully carried out an extensive 8-month project..." ?

2. "fault finding and further repair" sounds OK?

3. "Hard-working, initiative, communicative, purposeful"
Are they all in a right form?

Thank you very much in advance.

Maxim
 
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