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    Sorry for posting silly questions again as I really need help for the passage below. Thanks again for helping! T_T

    I still remember when you went into the departure hall at the airport, my eyes became red and the tears shed from my eyes! Every time when I think of this, I always laugh because I think I am very silly. I knew you would come back, but I still cry.

    Would anyone help proof-read the above passage? Thanks

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    I still remember when you went into the departure hall at the airport, my eyes became red and the tears shed from my eyes! Every time when I think of this, I always laugh because I think I am very silly. I knew you would come back, but I still cry.
    Try:

    • I still remember when you went into the departure hall at the airport. My eyes became red and the tears flowed from my eyes! Every time I think of that I laugh, because I think I was very silly. I knew you would come back, but I cried anyhow.


    (The word still can be ambiguous, since it has more than one meaning.)

    What do you think?

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    Thank you very very much, RonBee! ^o^

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    Default Re: Thank you! ^o^

    Quote Originally Posted by Helped Wanted
    Thank you very very much, RonBee! ^o^
    You're quite welcome.

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