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    Default Please proofread the CV

    Mr Ivan Ivanov
    555 55 55 (Evening)
    33 33 33 (Mobile)


    An open-minded and ambitious leader of the management accounting and budgeting team with 6 years experience.
    Looking for employment with a respectable company that provides opportunities for interesting, developmental, creative job

    Personal Details
    Date of Birth:
    1st of January, 1983

    Status
    Married


    Adress: ..................

    Professional Skills
    -Organizing the accounting department and staff
    -Strong analytical skills, practiced at drilling down to transaction details to improve efficiency and profitability
    -Collaborating effectively with business managers to resolve variances, define forecasts, identify opportunities
    -Advanced PC user in OEBS, MS Office Suite
    -English level: intermediate
    -CMA candidate

    Work Experience
    Head of management accounting and budgeting dept
    CJSC CV Protek in Russia, Moscow

    (Nov. 2009 - Present)
    General management of management accounting and budgeting department;
    Providing company's management reporting;
    Creating and developing of decision support system in the company;
    Taking responsibility for annual and quarterly financial budgets preparation process;
    Reengineering business processes in management accounting, forecasting and budgeting area.;
    Development of the ways of increasing profitability and minimizing operation costs
    Analyzing sales and profit figures and creating forecasts.

    Leader of the management reporting group
    CJSC CV Protek in Russia, Moscow
    May 2005 to November 2009
    General management of 3 analysts in management reporting area.

    Development of informational reporting system in the company to management decision support.
    Writing technical designs for IT dept, testing completed applications.
    Taking part in preparation financial reporting in accordance with international financial reporting standart.
    Working in a team for international audit passing.


    Education History
    Economist
    Volgograde State Technical University in Russia, Volgograd
    September 1999 till June 2004
    International management graduated with honours

    Lawyer
    Russian State University for the Humanities in Russia, Moscow
    September 2002 to June 2005
    Graduated with honours

    Certifiied Management Accountant Candidate
    February 2009 – Present
    Institute of management accountants in the USA, New Jersey.

    Qualifications
    Higher education World management - Bachelor of economy
    Higher education Civil law - Lawyer
    Last edited by Scarlett_dream; 19-Oct-2010 at 20:06.

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    Default Re: Please proofread the CV

    A few quick notes.

    1. If you are using this in the US get rid of the date of birth and marital status.

    2. Move the address up with your name and phone numbers.

    3. Make all your sentence formats consistent. Some have dashes, others don't. Some have periods, others have semicolons, some have no ending punctuation.

    4. Get rid of all the verbs ending in -ing.

    Organizing the accounting department
    Organized the accounting department.

    Creating and developing of decision support system
    Created and developed the decision support system.

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