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    proofread

    Hi there,
    Please proofread the following question:

    In the last stanza, which phrase(s) or sentence(s) suggest(s) that the love of the narrator towards his beloved.

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    Re: proofread

    Quote Originally Posted by simon1234 View Post
    Hi there,
    Please proofread the following question:

    In the last stanza, which phrase(s) or sentence(s) suggest(s) that the love of the narrator towards his beloved.

    Either omit "that" or, if doing so doesn't exprress your intended meaning, make another change.
    simon
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