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"The Traveling Eid"


Prepared was
the lifetime,
to travel
like a rose
in a garden, forgotten.


The Eid,
gathered
his things
and gone
in the presence
of my broken laughs.


and there is no pleasure
to restore
for my confused evenings,
their beautiful calm, the far one.


Grief
possess me.
refusing
amity of the morning's pigeons


When I was a little girl,
my only doll
lost.
Ever since, long time ago
my dear things
getting lost,
one following the other.