Re: , of financial governance and of raw materials markets.
Is he targeting the reform? He thinks people are trying to make these reforms and doesn't like it, so that's what he's targeting? Or has he targeted those things FOR reform?
The comma is NOT options if there are three targets. If the other two are explanations of the first, then another type of punctuation, perhaps an em-dash, is needed.
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.