Kindly check my grammar

[ranthrave]

Hello sir/maam

Kindly check my grammar. This sentence will be place under my policy (guidelines in conducting satisfaction survey):


1. Client preferences and needs changes rapidly over a period of time. Hence, client satisfaction survey shall be conducted every year.

 

[Munch]

Client preferences and needs change rapidly, so the client satisfaction survey will be conducted every year.

That is how I would word it.

 

[ranthrave]

Client preferences and needs change rapidly, so the client satisfaction survey will be conducted every year.

That is how I would word it.

Tnx sir. Anymore ideas sir/maam?

I'm avoiding to use a word "so that" & "so".

 

[Munch]

Tnx sir. Anymore ideas sir/maam?

I'm avoiding to use a word "so that" & "so".

Why do you want to avoid "so"?

Anyway:

Because/As client preferences and needs change rapidly, the client satisfaction survey will be conducted every year.

I have a feeling you will not be happy with "because" or "as" at the start of a sentence though. Sorry! Tell us more about your situation so we can help you.

 

[ranthrave]

Why do you want to avoid "so"?

Anyway:

Because/As client preferences and needs change rapidly, the client satisfaction survey will be conducted every year.

I have a feeling you will not be happy with "because" or "as" at the start of a sentence though. Sorry! Tell us more about your situation so we can help you.

My situation..
Sir I'm doing a policy (guidelines)

I might consider number two (2)

1.As client preferences and needs change rapidly, the client satisfaction survey will be conducted every year.

2.Client preferences and needs change rapidly, the client satisfaction survey will be conducted every year.

Thanks sir

 

[Munch]

My situation..
Sir I'm doing a policy (guidelines)

I might consider number two (2)

1.As client preferences and needs change rapidly, the client satisfaction survey will be conducted every year.

2.Client preferences and needs change rapidly, the client satisfaction survey will be conducted every year.

Thanks sir

Why? To me, number 2 is grammaticality incorrect.

 

[ranthrave]

Yah.. So I will consider number 1