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    which sentence is grammatical or better?

    Which of the following sentences is grammatical or better?

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    From 1999 to 2002, when he was studying in xxx Schoo, I worked as his math teacher and class tutor.

    From 1999 to 2002, he was studying in xxx Schoo, and I worked as his math teacher and class tutor.

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    Re: which sentence is grammatical or better?

    Quote Originally Posted by runbabyrun View Post
    Which of the following sentences is grammatical or better?

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    From 1999 to 2002, when he was studying in xxx Schoo, I worked as his math teacher and class tutor.

    From 1999 to 2002, he was studying in xxx Schoo, and I worked as his math teacher and class tutor.
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    Runbabyrun,

    I most respectfully suggest a few changes in both sentences:

    When he was a student at Central High School from 1999 - 2002, I

    was his math teacher and class tutor.

    He was a student at Central High School from 1999 - 2002, and

    I was his math teacher and class tutor.

    I personally prefer the first sentence that I have suggested.

    ********** NOT A TEACHER **********


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    Re: which sentence is grammatical or better?

    Quote Originally Posted by TheParser View Post
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    Runbabyrun,

    I most respectfully suggest a few changes in both sentences:

    When he was a student at Central High School from 1999 - 2002, I

    was his math teacher and class tutor.

    He was a student at Central High School from 1999 - 2002, and

    I was his math teacher and class tutor.

    I personally prefer the first sentence that I have suggested.

    ********** NOT A TEACHER **********
    Thank you very much!

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