I'm doing the "Criminals are Made" side of the topic and here's what i got so far
the plan should have:
Introductory paragraph
1st paragraph-->topic sentence; supporting detail 1 then evidence; supporting detail 2 then evidence; supporting detail 3 then evidence; closing sentence.

2nd paragraph-->topic sentence; supporting detail 1 then evidence; supporting detail 2 then evidence; supporting detail 3 then evidence; closing sentence.

3rd paragraph-->topic sentence; supporting detail 1 then evidence; supporting detail 2 then evidence; supporting detail 3 then evidence; closing sentence.

Paragraph of Refutation

Conclusion

I did it twice and my teacher still says its incorrect
i'll put up my essay draft after i've made 5 posts