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    Post please correct my email

    Please help to write the following email. Thanks

    As we discussed earlier today that I would like to take couple hours vacation time in the afternoon of Jan. 03. I would like to leave 12:00 PM at my lunch time. I will return as soon as done with the appointment.
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    Re: please correct my email

    Quote Originally Posted by jkl View Post

    As we discussed earlier today that I would like to take couple hours vacation time in the afternoon of Jan. 03. I would like to leave 12:00 PM at my lunch time. I will return as soon as done with the appointment.
    Basically, the easiest way to correct this is to rewrite it. Please don't feel that it is bad. I have tried to keep to the original where possible.

    As discussed earlier today, I would like to take two hours vacation on January 3rd. I would like to leave at noon at the beginning of my lunch break. I will return as soon as my appointment is over.

    I hope this helps.
    Stephen
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