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    zaffar is offline Junior Member
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    dear teacher,
    can i use a complex sentence as a part of the compound sentence. I want to know which sentence is correct,
    " I have had enough experience, but, when i ask for a raise in salary, they simply refuse".
    or this one is correct?
    " I have had enough experience, but they simply refuse when i ask for a raise in salary

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    Default Re: which sentence is correct

    The bit I'd change is 'have had' to 'have'. The second runs better than the first to me. The commas in the first are OK, but ...

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