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    Default my very first toefl assay .. please correct me :)

    this is my first assay in TOEFL .. my english in not that good but i tried to write something .. i'll appreciate it if anyone correct me


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    people attend school for many different reasons . why do you think people decide to go to school ? use specific reasons and examples to support ur answer .

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    most people attend school to expand their knowldge and to specilized in what they love .

    getting into a school or university will allow people to have a good job in the future because the primary requirement for getting a job is to have a good certificate from respected school.

    the weirdest student that are the ones who keep skipping classes and tried hard to get a low gared in order to stay in their school with their friends .
    this is and example of some people who attend school for making friends and social life .

    there are other people who attend school to pleased their parents .
    so they are tried to achive what their parents failed to acheive in the past and they are not less weird than the people who attend school for making friends .

    in my openion , schools help people to expand their knowlge and make their eyes open in the future .
    by getting into school we learn how to be responsable and our talent increase and get better .
    so lets says that the goodness on a population can be measured by their good school and their highly educated people .


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    Default Re: my very first toefl assay .. please correct me :)

    anyone plz :(

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    thank u very much :)

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